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Naruto: The next demension pt. by ~oturan123456:iconoturan123456:



Okay everyone I know what your thnking that im creating new stories but not finishing my other one's well the jonin tournament was just a prolouge to this one. I actually planned this something hapens during the jonin tournament and I have to leave there i just gave you a spoiler.



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Tsunade announced,"The next battle shall be between Neji Hyuuga and Oturan Uzumaki." "Now its my turn." I said. Neji started walking down the arena stairs and as he passed me something was different about him. I shook it off and kept walking. "Good luck bro!!!!" Naruto yelled at me. "Don't hold back." Ray yelled at me as well. "Don't worry I won't." When I got downstairs Neji was getting ready. But when he pratice his rotation I felt the darkness shift. I gasped and said,"N-No I-It c-can't b-be i dealed with him a long time ago." I said with a shiver. With that I ran as fast as I could so I could find Tenten.


"Hey Oturan aren't you getting ready to fight my teamate?" Tenten asked. "There's something I gotta tell you." I said. "What is it?" She asked. I whispered lowly so that only she would hear. She started to tear up. "No wait you
can't cry not yet ok so here is the plan i' m gonna make a darkness clone powerful enough to with stand neji's attacks for 15 minutes. When it poofs away i need you to kill Neji. And don't tell anyone what I just told you or else everything that i'm about to do is going to be pointless do you understand?" I asked. "Yeah." She sniffed. As I walked away she said,"But wait were are you going." "Thats only need to know and you dont need to know." I replied. She stood there and whispered,"Good luck."



The battle was about to begin. Everyone was jittering with excitement. "This is gonna be a really good battle." Okami said in Kiba arms. "I think so too." Kiba said. Neji threw some kunai. The clone repelled it with shuriken and then jumped at Neji. Neji did a rotation and the clone hit it at full speed. Then Neji said,"8 trigrams 64 palms." He did it so fast barely anyone could see it. The clone then poofed away. Tenten then jumped up and threw alot of weapons at Neji. They hit him full force. He stood there as Tenten landed. Then out of no where he exploded and darkness poured out of him. "What the heck was that?" Naruto said. "I-I don't know Naruto." Sakura answered. "Wait what is going on why did Tenten just kill neji?" Okami asked. "Beats me." Kiba replied. "W-where is O-Oturan?" Ayame asked as she ran up towards them. "We don't know lets go to Tenten she probably knows were he is." Naruto said. "O-Ok." Ayame said whipping her face.




"Ok so let me get this straight Neji is dead, That was a clone, and Oturan went off somewere to deal with someone named Saki?" Ray said. "Yeah thats right Tenten answered. "And were is he going?" Okami asked. "He wouldn't tell me he said I didn't need to know." She answered. "Wait a minute I think I know were he is going lets go to my house." Naruto said. When they got to his house there was a headband and a note on the table. Naruto read the note outloud,



                               I'm sorry Naruto but I have to leave
                      to deal with Saki I knew he was back when I
                              saw neji in the arena. I am going to find
                        him in the dark demension. Don't come after me
                      tell ayame I love her and will miss her. Naruto
                            I know your going to want to come after me
                       But dont its too dangerous. If Saki gets a hold
                         Of any one my friends is caught by Saki's
                        forces I won't be able to destroy. Its been
                    good Ray and Okami I really am going to miss you
                      guys. Bye bro I'm gonna miss ya
                                                                               Love,
                                                                                        Oturan Uzumaki



"He's not coming back?" Ayame asked. "No he isn't he had to deal with Saki when we were kids and he got lucky and he is going to need alot more than luck to defeat him." Naruto said. "He needs us." Okami replied. "He just told us not ot go after him." Tenten said. "Yeah but that has never stopped us before." Okami replied back. "Ok Okami even if we did go after him how would we get to the dark demension?" Ray said. "I think i know someone that can help us." Sakura said. "WHO???" Everyone asked. "Sasuke." she answered. "Ever since the flying ninja have attacked we have lost track of Sasuke bill board brow." Ino said. "I overheard some anbu talking, they said that sasuke would be in the village hidden in the rain tomorrow." She said. "How would we get there in a day?" Ray asked. "I think I can answer that." Shikamaru said standing up off of naruto's couch.




And in 15 minutes they were on a train heading for the village hidden in the rain. With permission from Tsunade they were aloud to go with 3 Jonin. Jashin-sensai,Higure-sensai, and Kakashi-sensai. "OK guys we have to find Sasuke as soon as we get to the village hidden in the rain." Naruto said with some sadness in his voice. Sakura looked at Naruto and then gave him a hug. Naruto blushed a little but not alot since he was sad. "Don't worry its going to be okay Naruto we will find Oturan and help him kill Saki once and for all." Sakura said to him. "Thank you Sakura-chan."


"You're welcome Naruto.....Kun."
©2009 ~oturan123456
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Author's Comments

Uh oh cliff hanger exciting right tell me what you think no bad comments please. I do not own Naruto Ray or Okami I only own Oturan

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:iconoturan123456:
lol your so defensive

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Aww man im bored

Time for randomness :dance: :dance: :D
:iconsupernarusakufanatic:
Am not

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Its all in the timing, and its time for me to to nap!!
:iconoturan123456:
You are so defensive

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Aww man im bored

Time for randomness :dance: :dance: :D
:iconsupernarusakufanatic:
Not

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Its all in the timing, and its time for me to to nap!!
:iconoturan123456:
Yes you are

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Aww man im bored

Time for randomness :dance: :dance: :D
:iconsupernarusakufanatic:
Not

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Its all in the timing, and its time for me to to nap!!
:iconoturan123456:
Whatever you say ray

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Aww man im bored

Time for randomness :dance: :dance: :D
:iconsupernarusakufanatic:
Of course

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Its all in the timing, and its time for me to to nap!!
:iconoturan123456:
I still think your defensive ask anyone

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Aww man im bored

Time for randomness :dance: :dance: :D
:iconsupernarusakufanatic:
What would I be defensive about?

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Its all in the timing, and its time for me to to nap!!

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